-i use color well...
a lot of it and in an interesting way
-shadows on the doll painting add great depth
-good values in my work, showing different tones, preventing the spaces from looking flat
-view lines are well composed, eyes are easily lead to the focal point
-compositions have good flow
-good use of negative space, the lack of objects, focusing on the simple folds of the cloth... interesting choice
-good use of the paint, lots of layering
-good mood
Critical Feedback:
-in the white objects and then trying to work on this in the later still-life painting...
making things feel solid.
the table that objects are sitting on, that the objects themselves are masses and exert force on the table. Ground the objects
-on the white objects, feels a bit one tone. Work on value. There were a lot of different colors but all brought down to the same range... takes away some of the beauty in the diversity of colors... they have all been muted.
they blend too much
-use the highlights and deep shadows... and use them to your advantage.
they will help create depth, solidify the objects and give the painting richer value
Progress:
-i had a distinct style and opinion to start with
-with the practice and time, seems more comfortable. I have figured out my style and learned how to use it more successfully
-George referenced Monet in the weight of my brushstrokes
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